I think this is a good enough discription. If it's not let me know.


Name: Moon Goddess
Real Name: Mia Tremor
Gender: Female
Role: Superheroine
Age: 23
Height: 5’5
Weight: 120 pounds
Race: Asian
Hair: Black
Eyes: Green


Description: A 5’5 Asian female with what many call a beautiful face with long black hair going past her shoulder and a slim body. Her costume is gray with some black strips around the neck waist and arms. She refused to wear boot but wears black sneakers. Her legs are bare but her arms are not and her hands are covered with black gloves with some short spikes on them. Despite her name she is not a Goddess but just a human with super powers.

Personality: Although she is human she likes to think of her self like a Goddess and has this feeling that she is invulnerable. Mia looks down on other heroes think they are useless and not worth teaming up with them. She is also very naïve and often falls into traps. Although untrustworthy of other heroes she has a bad habit of believing Super Villains although when they are fighting she is merciless.

When not in superhero form she is friendlier and cheerful. Her job is a secretary in an office building where she sucks up to her boss and tries to outwit her rivals in the office in order to get praise or ahead.

History: Born during a solar eclipse Mia was born with an unnatural ability to shoot Lunar Light out of her hands. After scaring her neighbors at age 5 by blowing half their house away she kept her powers a secret and was able to live a normal life. At age 18 she was mugged on the street at gunpoint so she could not have the chance to use her powers and had her purse, shoes, and money taken. Feeling angry she walked across the same street the next night and the same mugger came out. This time she was ready and blasted him with her lunar light. From there she took classes on hand to hand fighting and started to research other heroes and villains. Finally at age 23 she made her costume and was ready to take on other villains.

Her grandparents changed their names after World War 2 so her name is not really asian.

Powers: Able to shoot Lunar Light (Lasers) from her hands.

Weaknesses: When using Lunar Light her powers get drained making her weaker physically. It recharges after a few hours. She is also very naïve.

Powergrid:
Intelligence: 1
Strength: 5
Speed: 3
Durability: 2
Energy Projection: 7
Fighting Skills: 4

Okay, the problem here.

You are not allowed to have powers at 7, at the start, you have to work for that.

So lower her EP to 6. Also she is kinda low Int, one means, you have below average intelligence.

Also, pictures would be helpful, but if you can't find one that is understandable.

Ok is this better? Sorry did not see that powers can not start out as 7


Powergrid:
Intelligence: 4
Strength: 5
Speed: 3
Durability: 2
Energy Projection: 4
Fighting Skills: 4

That will work, but also, you can only get one point per stat, so if you want to raise your EP to 6, then you can work up to 7. At 5 the most you can have 6 at the end.

I'll stick with 5

Looks good. I'll say approved and make a grid when I reformat my comp tomorrow.

So I am good to start rping?

Yep...